Pale early summer wind full of apple blossoms gutters brim with pink.
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From: Tim (but not THE Tim) (May 06 2009, at 17:12)
That is an _excellent_ example of the haiku form, in my opinion. Thanks.
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From: shita (May 13 2009, at 16:40)
For Japanese, "Haiku" must consist of "season word" and "5-7-5 sound symbol".
Season word: early summer
Sound symbol : ???
But, in English, only seasonal word seemed to be required..
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
From: Erick Herring (May 15 2009, at 19:04)
Haiku is easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
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From: Matijs van Zuijlen (May 16 2009, at 01:34)
Shita, 'sound symbol' would be syllable in English, and this one does follow the 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
Or do you mean something different entirely?
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From: Tim (but not THE Tim) (May 06 2009, at 17:12)
That is an _excellent_ example of the haiku form, in my opinion. Thanks.
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From: shita (May 13 2009, at 16:40)
For Japanese, "Haiku" must consist of "season word" and "5-7-5 sound symbol".
Season word: early summer
Sound symbol : ???
But, in English, only seasonal word seemed to be required..
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
[link]
From: Erick Herring (May 15 2009, at 19:04)
Haiku is easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
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From: Matijs van Zuijlen (May 16 2009, at 01:34)
Shita, 'sound symbol' would be syllable in English, and this one does follow the 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
Or do you mean something different entirely?
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